One Sketch #40) Chapel Take 2

Yes, I'm sorry to be repeating myself, but to be honest, the one I did two days ago, well as a personal sketch it's fine, but not for a commission. It was hard to put my finger on it, but that front end just wasn't right. So, nothing daunted, I've had another go.

If at first you do not win,
Take your pen and try agin
If it does not work out then
Throw away your useless pen.